The Misadventures of Sibeh Sian

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Thursday, July 05, 2007

The long and short about The Grasshopper



I am very, very excited when Nerd showed me this.

If you must know, I have always dreamt of being a professional poet. I see this Golden Point Award thingy as a golden opportunity, and I immediately grabbed my pen to come up with the following entry:


The Grasshopper

“There was once a noisy grasshopper,
Who made a lot of noise.
Crkk Crkk Crkk, Crkk Crkk Crkk.
It was very noisy.”

-Sibeh Sian
Autumn, 2007



Nerd thinks it’s brilliant. Even Office Bimbo say it’s my best work so far :)


With Love,
Sibeh Sian

22 Comments:

  • At Friday, July 06, 2007 12:46:00 AM, Blogger terraauroraaustralis said…

    hahaha!

    that really got me all cracked up! you know, i think i might just got crk crk crk after reading your entry. (:

     
  • At Friday, July 06, 2007 1:49:00 AM, Blogger Kenneth said…

    Hmm... Were you threatening them at knife point or just their lunch when they told you it was nice 0.0

     
  • At Friday, July 06, 2007 1:59:00 AM, Blogger eileen` said…

    you should make it longer you know, you should.

     
  • At Friday, July 06, 2007 2:40:00 AM, Blogger jenno said…

    maybe u shd add in some description about the grasshopper.. like how green it is and all...

    feel very, very lucky because i happened to take a picture of a grasshopper hopping around my garden.

    here's the link!

    http://bp3.blogger.com/_s8xpGPhb4sg/Ro06whdSQvI/AAAAAAAAByk/v5u-j9n0qYI/s1600-h/DSC02666.JPG

    hope it inspires you! (: jiayou!

     
  • At Friday, July 06, 2007 2:40:00 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    i tink they will just send you back an email thankin u for your participation.

     
  • At Friday, July 06, 2007 2:57:00 AM, Blogger kangaroo said…

    i seriously think that you will win...

    if you sign up as a pre-school participant. =X

    haha! but if you put your blog up, you might just win the most entertaining blog award. because i love to come here to read. brings smiles to my face. blog often please. HAHA!

     
  • At Friday, July 06, 2007 8:07:00 AM, Blogger Ivan said…

    you hong kan liao.

     
  • At Friday, July 06, 2007 12:10:00 PM, Blogger Miissy said…

    maybe u can try writing a 'haiku'..
    =________="

     
  • At Friday, July 06, 2007 1:21:00 PM, Blogger Christel said…

    ...... about your poem.....

    That Alan journalist has been freed lah! Your banner still there?

     
  • At Friday, July 06, 2007 3:57:00 PM, Blogger PinKk said…

    i think The Broken Heart is much nicer lehhh...

     
  • At Friday, July 06, 2007 8:04:00 PM, Blogger 4_eva said…

    Wahh Sian! Very good work! Write some more poems lehs!

     
  • At Friday, July 06, 2007 8:51:00 PM, Blogger Unknown said…

    zzz. The mosqitoe poem is much better than this crap.

     
  • At Friday, July 06, 2007 11:03:00 PM, Blogger jAsLyN said…

    Yay. You will definately win the award. No doubts. Heh!

     
  • At Saturday, July 07, 2007 1:57:00 AM, Blogger eunice said…

    aww come on, do a proper one this time! i'm pretty sure you wrote a genuinely good one. don't hoard it!

     
  • At Saturday, July 07, 2007 2:07:00 PM, Blogger mrdes said…

    You know, the problem with me and peoms is I never could understand what most of them are trying to tell me. Now, I got no such problem with yours, which is a good sign:P All the best.

     
  • At Sunday, July 08, 2007 1:32:00 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Hello!

    Somehow or rather, I'm rather interested in that competition. But the thing is, I'm 14 so I was wondering if there was to be an age limit. Any idea?

    Anyway, would you please be so kind to go to my blog and put up your comments on some of the poems posted there? Thanks, cause seriously, I really want to see if I could make the grade.

    Thank you :D

     
  • At Sunday, July 08, 2007 9:30:00 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Hey sian, i'll be taking part too... u would need 4 poetries, not 1!!!

    I'll be fighting u in that competition!

     
  • At Sunday, July 08, 2007 3:42:00 PM, Blogger Kenneth said…

    happened to glance at ur counter.. .woah 127k visitors alr... jy jy



    ps... if ms tan knows bout this blog sure become 1million de =)

     
  • At Sunday, July 08, 2007 9:48:00 PM, Blogger 4_eva said…

    Sian, got bad news =( KFC prices went up liaos.. So have to eat less KFC alrdy..

     
  • At Monday, July 09, 2007 7:25:00 AM, Blogger Andy said…

    HAHA! Go for it Sian! You might get it with that poem! Crk!

     
  • At Wednesday, July 18, 2007 10:59:00 AM, Blogger Kim said…

    so did you win or not?

     
  • At Thursday, July 26, 2007 11:41:00 PM, Blogger Sibeh Sian said…

    Garry: I was very touched by my poem too, haha :D....

    Kenneth: They sounded very sincere when they said that was my best poem :P!

    Eileen: Haha, some poems, dun need to be long one :D!

    Jenno: Not only is it green, grasshoppers have feelers too :D! Haha :)....

    Aileen: Haha, they are such poilte people :)!

    Kangaroo: If I win I promise I will write more of my poems :D!

    Ivan: Sibeh, sibeh hong kan :P!

    Adrenaline: That was my masterpiece sia :D!

    Imim: Haha, what's a haiku huh :D?

    Christel: Haha, paiseh, a bit lazy to take it down, haha :D....

    Pinkk: I must admit The Broken Heart is one tough act to match :P!

    4_eva: Haha, I will, I will :D!

    Ihoj: Haha, but grasshopper more powerful, they eat mosquitoes one :D!

    Jaslyn: Thanks, I think so too :D!

    Eunice: I am very honest one, this is the exact one I wrote :D!

    Mrdes: Haha, thanks thanks, I glad you like my work :D!

    Teresa: I read your poems le! Sibeh powerful. Please don't enter the competition hor! Muahaha :D!

    Alvin: 4 poems?!?!? Argh :P....

    Kenneth: I pray fervertly she will never know of this blog sia :P!

    4_eva: It went up by a few cents sia! Too much :(!!!!

    Andy: I think I will win too, yeah :D!

    Kim: Haha, not so fast know the results one, haha :D....

     

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